07-20-2013, 04:03 AM
نقد خوبی بود. رو بخش مقدمه بیشتر کار کن. یه چیز هیجانی تر بنویس یارو با کله تا ته متنت رو بخونه. پیاز داغش رو زیاد کن [img]images/smi/s0 (43).gif[/img][img]images/smi/s0 (74).gif[/img][img]images/smi/s0 (25).gif[/img]
The more you give, the more I maim
You are spirit, and I am bane
Your truth strikes through, as steel guides true
It's enough for pride, but not enough to survive
Your truth strikes through, as steel guides true
It's enough for pride, but not enough to survive