10-06-2013, 06:35 PM
پیش نمایش قشنگی بود. مقدمه خوب، پاراگراف بندیت هم خوشحالم روش کار کردی ولی همچنان اون مواردی رو که جلسه اول گفتم رعایت نکردی. ( مشکلات ویراستاری)
The more you give, the more I maim
You are spirit, and I am bane
Your truth strikes through, as steel guides true
It's enough for pride, but not enough to survive
Your truth strikes through, as steel guides true
It's enough for pride, but not enough to survive